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    Author: * Vortigern Aedui - 2 Posts on this thread out of 2,435 Posts sitewide.
    Date: May 30, 2004 - 03:22

    Nice Haiku. Unfortunately it wasn't even close to being the correct form. Not only is it incorrect haiku, but it is a metrical abortion. What else should we expect from you though?

    You never cease to amaze me [8]
    With your stupid posts and wayout ideas [11]
    It wouldn't be AW without you [11]

    I guess everywhere you go there is one [10]
    Someone who defies description [8]
    and logic and thought [5] (getting closer)

    Sometimes he's good, sometimes he's bad [8]
    Other times he's...???????? [I have no idea how many sylables ???????? has]
    That's our Vort. [3]


    Celestial brings
    Assembly duplication?
    Creative, its not

    The posts are filled with
    Intellectual stroking
    self loving at best

    Feng Shui, noodle brain
    copy and paste seems the way
    copyright lawsuit




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